
By Daniela Smith-Fernandez
In the dark of night, perspectives are different. This is a key theme, not only of this book but of many works of fiction. Darkness and night are understood to stand in for the chaotic, the hidden, the place where people behave in ways that they wouldn’t were they subjected to the cold clear scrutiny of daylight logic. This key metaphor goes deep in many cultures, and it is finessed beautifully in this play by Evelyne de la Chenelière, a québécoise playwright who I will definitely be seeking more of.

Speaking of perspectives, there was some language drama on my end with this text. I was given the English translation (thank you again Playwrights Canada Press), but the original is written in French, a language which I live, work, see theatre and write in. I have strong feelings about reading texts in the original language, so before I could review the translation I had to buy the original French play, Le traitement de la nuit and read it before I was willing to write a review. I don’t know if other multilingual people struggle with this issue as well, but I do. Which means that I can confidently say my review is informed not only by multiple readings, but also both in the original and the translation. I have given this play my time and my energy and feel entitled to make an analysis. Just so you know.
The story is full of ambiguity. We have Lena, the main character, who is the daughter of Bernard and Viviane, a wealthy couple who own an estate. The couple assure us that she was brought into the world with light and love and mutual cooperation in birth, but Lena makes it equally clear her life does not exhibit the happiness and joy her birth foretold. From the beginning, she is antagonistic to her parents who express themselves graciously, ceremonially avoid all conflict and bend over backwards to cater to her whims. In the mean time, Lena keeps running away from home, something they dismiss as “like a dog”. Their landscaper Jeremie, an ex-con, is paraded around as a sign of their magnanimous nature in front of their friends. That is until night falls, at which point Viviane swallows copious amounts of pills to deal with her insomnia and Bernard drives his Mercedes down dark roads. Lena and Jeremie are quickly complicit, sharing a garden shed as Jeremie hates houses. In the dark we finally see the cracks that their daytime pretences have caused and our vision of everyone becomes murkier and more complicated.
None of the characters are pure, that much is very clear, however what they are guilty of is difficult to determine in the script. It”s hard to reveal too much without giving spoilers, but I will say I tended to believe that Lena and Jeremie”s last scene did reflect a concrete truth. Viviane and Bernard are difficult characters to like, but equally hard to dismiss. They try hard to do positive things for struggling people, but there is a sense it is all performative. At the same time, their refusal to see their daughter Lena as she is, where she is and what she is, pushes Lena to further extremes away from them. There are so many choices to be made on the part of each actor and the collective productive how to approach this story.
The tricky part of this play for me, and the reason I read it so many times, is that there is so much mystery in terms of what is true and what is an illusion on the part of the characters. Their declarations contradict, erase each other, turn out to be dreams or illusions. Any director who takes on this script has big decisions to make as to what concretely has gone on because there are so many interpretations of concrete events. At one point I literally sat down and traced out all the possibilities of what could have been true and the number was staggering. Honestly, you could probably even play the whole thing as a “it was all a dream” Deus Ex Machina without difficulty.
The language is soft and lyrical, simple and elegant. The longer speeches make sense in context, and not a word is wasted. Everything builds to a crescendo of a strange, confusing, mixed up world with characters who can”t be bothered to see each other as they are. It’s a complex emotional landscape which is confusing and compelling.
As a concept I love everything about this book. As a reader, I found it incredibly unsatisfying. I feel like this would be better as a play infused with directorial decisions than lines on a page. I found myself trying to visualize casting this show, just to make sense of it, and playing around with different hints and allusions through set and costume choices. I think by some parameters that makes this a good script in that you want to transform it, but it also makes for incredibly frustrating reading.
This may be a case of learning to read plays in a different way than you read novels. I thought I knew a little about that distinction, but it turns out it is a process. I hope that as I keep reviewing I can start to develop techniques for understanding theatrical writing differently.
Thanks for reading!
Daniela Smith-Fernandez is Chilean-Canadian by birth, francophone by choice. She is an artist, writer and craftsperson who is proudly multicultural and multilingual (English, Spanish, French). She has worked in theatre as a costumer, prop maker, venue manager and volunteer. Her theatre reviews and articles have been published in student newspapers and blog. She is currently writing the second play in a trilogy about Jean-François, a man who is obsessed with sex and French grammar, not always in that order. She writes in English and French.









